Poem (virelai): “A Ride in the Car”
April continues with National Poetry Month. I’m challenging myself to write one poem per day for the month. I’m partly using this as a chance to experiment with poetic forms. For the virelai, I challenged myself to write a poem whose form started with the letter of my first name. You can read more about the vieralai form here: https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/virelai-poetic-forms
My poem from April 15th just happened to be about corgis (and I’m pretty sure at least one more poem this month will revolve around them as well).
“A Ride in the Car”

We wake up and bark
In the early dark,
Waiting
To hear singing lark
Or squirrel’s snark
Playing
With canine ears: mark
Out teeth like a shark’s
Staying
Our owner’s command.
A hush takes the land:
A plop
Of sustenance canned.
Our dish in her hand,
The slop—
Food! We understand!
Our barks, as she planned,
Then stop
As we eat. Then out,
Bark over her shout:
New mark:
The car is about!
We sniff, snort, and scout
Then bark
Excitement and clout
And follow the route:
The park!
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